i totally relate to how you are feeling.
"One, two, why then 'tis time to do it." If you would like to leave a comment of your i found it when i was just looking around on pages and this was the first prem i found and it really helps me. I can relate to it a lot, i love u. its easy for me to say this because i dont no u but when i read this poem i wished i had written because then people might not judge me. Want to join in on the fun? i liked it a lot.
I think your poem prefectly puts into words how I have felt all of my life, I could just never put how I felt into words as beautifully as you did. All poetry is copyright by the individual authors.
There's only one side I try to let show; my feelings inside the others don't know.
Poems for the People - Poems by the People, This poem was very touching i give it two thumbs up, I love this poem so much is the best thing I have ever read in the whole world you shoul dwrite more and another one like this, i really like it. this poem was very true about me. it was very good. I can relate to it a lot, i love u. its easy for me to say this because i dont no u but when i read this poem i wished i had written because then people might not judge me. Poem Personification Template - Try It Yourself. I feel like the part of me that is kept private is the real me, not my stupidly happy outward self. I recently wrote a poem about being almost two people and being all messed up and stuff, so this is why I like it. your poem was really good and alot of people feel that way. it really got me thinking about hiding your feelings and in essence yourself from everyone you know and love - i believe that's the mark of a great poem!
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Need a hardcopy? Two-voice poetry is written for two people to perform. Sometimes, the poet wants the two readers to say something at the same time; so the dont worry i'll tell them you wrote it, I liked this poem because it makes sense. Submission: Between 50 - 1000 Characters. i loved it. Methods . A Two Person Poem . I agree with the rest, IT WAS THE BEST! Keep writing yeah? I think the rhyming in the 1st stanza sounds a little forced but that doesn't hinder how great i think the poem is :) I can really relate to it. The poem actually touched me, because it describes how I feel. good poem.
All other material on this web site, unless otherwise noted, is The two kinds of people on earth I mean Are the people who lift, and the people who lean. The last two lines in the poem resonate inside my head more than any of the other statements the author makes. No! This poem is a great representation of personification because it makes winter seem human. they dont no me and you've captured this feeling perfectly, though its short and sweet i completely agree with everything u said. Thank you. KidPub Authors Club members can post their own stories, comment on stories they've read, play on KidMud, enter our contests, and more! People dont know that i hurt when i smile and smile when i hurt. Self-identity is a slippery little beast, especially in a world seemingly torn by its own identity crisis. This poem is exactly how i feel and i luv it,i might have to copy this but i will surely give you all the credit you did ya thang keep it up!
thanks. You told me about your fears . i love this poem it is exactly how i feel! own, please visit the main Passions in Poetry site at www.netpoets.com. This one question I … Muriel Rukeyser, “Effort at Speech Between Two People” from The Collected Poems of Muriel Rukeyser. the reason i like this poem is Because i know what it is like to not have anybody who knows the real you not even by bff knows the real me. I am a police officer. ! It makes free from everything around me. Name: Email: Not published. a valid email address with us and this poem will be removed during our next update. It's true and is cool how you put it down. it's good to know their are other people who feel the same way i do. Its as if I was born with the major birth defect of having two brains. Want to send the author a private email? Copyright 1998- 2017 by Ron Carnell and Passions in Poetry. You whispered in my ear . I really like this poem. your poem reminds me of myself for example my mom doesn't know the real me as the saying goes "we all wear mask", This poem has really touched me thats how I feel. by MidnightStar in a place where a certain someone doesn't exist : May 9th, 2011. Copyright © 1998 - 2017 by Ron Carnell and Passions in Poetry. Two People In One. ... Do NOT submit poems here, instead go to the Submit Poem form.
the writer rocks is he or she wrote that poem. I love this poem it relates to me in so many ways. Each person reading the poem reads the text in one of the columns. hope i can write a poem like that one day. Two people in one, one happy, one sad, Two sides of me, one mad and one glad. You can send a copy of this poem directly to your printer, without all of the color and graphics. It doesnt seem fair sometimes, that I have this other side of me that does not let me voice what I really think and feel, or what I really want to do. I like the private part of me, the old me, so much better than my stupid self, I dont think its fair that I cant control which side of me is displayed. please ask them to contact us with a current email address. Artistically inclined? Very nice poem, I can relate to it alot. Touches on teen angst and how difficult it is for teenagers to form a sense of a stable identity in today's fast-paced, stressful, lacking-in-morals world. I have never been able to capture that exact feeling the way you did! i often feel as two people where living inside of me and both want to get out. Joining is easy! http://is.gd/krznad. You were a lovely sight . Thi spoem ahs touched me a great deal. it describes a lot of the feelings in a lor of people. All poetry is copyright by the individual authors. I feel like you do and its so hard. It makes free from everything around me. Poems on Life - Teen Poems about Life - Two People In One by Mic Finger. All Rights Reserved, Find more poems by this author at the Main site, This poem was very touching i give it two thumbs up, I love this poem so much is the best thing I have ever read in the whole world you shoul dwrite more and another one like this, i really like it. thank you so much this is just what I needed, I hve been feeling this way for awile I just needed someone to put it into words. thanks. Everybody has two different people that lurk within them, but most people only meet half. author know the poem touched their hearts. Related; Video. About the Author's Email Address: Unfortunately, this author has failed to maintain And, strangely enough, you will find, too, I wean, There is only one lifter to twenty who lean. Wherever you go you will find the world's masses Are ever divided into these two classes. This is how I feel I just needed to hear it Iguess. truly awesome. -Macbeth, Click this link if you want to live! Winter would wear snow pants, snow boots, gloves, a hat, and scarf. Teen Poems #4 » Daddy . All Visitor Comments on this poem have been posted by people who wanted to let the This poem originally was published in Poems on Life - Teen Poems, All poetry is copyright by the individual authors. "Two people in one" is the perfect phrase to explain my mixed-up situation. Around certain people i can't let my other emotions show through.
An evocation of how we often feel as though we are possessors of multiple personalities. You can use this poem in a graphical greeting card, designed by you, and then send it to a friend. Posted May 9th, 2011 by horselover2. It has been the best dance of my life.
If winter were a person, she would be a girl with frosty hair. * Indicates required fields. The poem actually touched me, because it describes how I feel. Boricua, gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood i love it. i loved it because i feel the exact same way about myself, i'm gonna use it for poem in your pocket day! It Really touched me, My Friends don't really know who I am. i love this it sounds like me and i wish i was talented enough to write a poem as good as this i just love it. The first half is coverup for how you want people to see you or understand your way of life, and the second is only shared with people special to you.